annkos - Rendering competition - AAndres

[indra lee]

wow cool annkos...Good luck broo

[annkos1980]

Thank you my friend!! Good luck to you too!!

[StompinTom]

Hey man! Looking great so far, love the curvy curviness of it.

One thing: I think you could really capitalize on the curvature of those edges by doing something with the floor and ceiling tiles that reflects that curve. Now it seems a bit too repetitive and "SketchUp"-like texturing. I think if you made that curve your focus and made the floor and ceiling planes echo it, you could get some really interesting results.

[annkos1980]

Thanks Tom!!! Here it is a night version that i give a try but with low settings for now.

[kurdapya]

Looking good.

I won't go for the 'lilies' imho, sorry. The statue is eye catching, nice subject in there.

Good Luck.

[annkos1980]

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Looking good.

I won't go for the 'lilies' imho, sorry. The statue is eye catching, nice subject in there.

Good Luck.

Thanks!! Yes i ll remove lilies, i dont like either, just a test :-)

[aandres]

To me, the books look a bit to much like a copy-paste design. There is not enough rhythm in it in terms of size and display

[annkos1980]

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To me, the books look a bit to much like a copy-paste design. There is not enough rhythm in it in terms of size and display

The books are 2 Groups with different textures but i am not happy with the result too! It needs a lot of time to do good job with the books and unfornunately i am very busy at the moment. Thanks for your time to comment!!

[aandres]

No problem. Consider not only using books but objects as well, makes it maybe easier.

[StahlgrenDesign]

I like all of your work annkos! Looking forward to see the final result! Good luck!

[annkos1980]

aandres: Yes propably i ll add some objects,thanks!

StahlgrenDesign: Thank you my friend!!

[AmLaEn]

Great so far. I hope you 'll have the time to finish it.

The source of the lights illuminating the ceiling is undefined (just testing I guess).

Keep up the good work!

[annkos1980]

Thanks m8!! Yes its just a test, of course i ll put some spots there.

[annkos1980]

A new update and bigger render!

http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/3...prefinal5i.jpg

[briktop]

Yeh!it's getting good!

[ignis]

bravo annkos, its getting really good with your familiar quality of work, i love the colors!

[annkos1980]

Thanks you guys!! I hope i ll have my final image in a couple of days.

[arkz01]

Thanks for the comment annkos my brother! I really like your colours! keep on going!

[metrocubicodigital]

Hi Annkos

Its looking great. One thing i find strange (just a tiny detail is how the left concret wall connects with the roof (edge). Looks like you should give more height to the map on the wall cause at the moment there is a tiny tiling left there in between and looks odd imo.

Rest is looking really good.

Other thing that might not go in your favour is that you are giving perhaps too much attention to the architecture and little attention to the aandres furniture which is a bit too much in the distance? Perhaps its just a question or turning the camera just a bit to the left.

Does the curve windows have double glass and bump?

[annkos1980]

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Hi Annkos

Its looking great. One thing i find strange (just a tiny detail is how the left concret wall connects with the roof (edge). Looks like you should give more height to the map on the wall cause at the moment there is a tiny tiling left there in between and looks odd imo.

Rest is looking really good.

Other thing that might not go in your favour is that you are giving perhaps too much attention to the architecture and little attention to the aandres furniture which is a bit too much in the distance? Perhaps its just a question or turning the camera just a bit to the left.

Does the curve windows have double glass and bump?

Thanks my friend! I cant believe it but right know i add double glass and bump to the glass and then i see your comment!!!