1. Join Date
    Nov 2016
    Posts
    1
    #1

    First Render (Started 2 years ago) pointers?

    So i've been working on this render on and off for a few months, started the model in revit over 2 years ago in my free time.
    i am keen to hear any feedback that one can give me on the lighting, materials, shaders etc,
    i have done no post production work on the image as yet.

    Rendered with V-Ray.

    Thanks in advance peeps!

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  2. Join Date
    Jul 2017
    Posts
    5
    #2

    You can take up the shadow subdivs then your sun light is softly more.
    The Intensity of the sun so high. You can try differrence filter (reinhard or exponential)
  3. Join Date
    Dec 2017
    Posts
    18
    #3

    I would add more space in framing on the top and both sides of the image. Also the material of those two steps ( wooden? ) doesn't look good. Maybe some texture would be good for white walls, I mean like a little noise in bump. Also those black metal elements are just black. It would be good to catch some reflections on them to show what material they are made with.
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